tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post2095609749168609515..comments2023-07-05T05:03:33.255-04:00Comments on Publish, or Perish!: Greatest BMX rider in the country-Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14945466553228253710noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post-2917032102048828302011-02-26T13:56:09.075-05:002011-02-26T13:56:09.075-05:00I would just add some more details on the tricks f...I would just add some more details on the tricks from out of the country. Also maybe some dialog on how humiliated the kid felt and how much of a sore loser he is. I don't think you should take any details away. I liked the story, good job!Bethany Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03885785894954523206noreply@blogger.com