tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post3477044482489254749..comments2023-07-05T05:03:33.255-04:00Comments on Publish, or Perish!: Shadows-Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14945466553228253710noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post-20824454716488626142010-09-28T16:14:04.599-04:002010-09-28T16:14:04.599-04:00I really liked how creative your story is. I also ...I really liked how creative your story is. I also like the line where the shadow is speaking into the mirror in another language. That was really interesting and creative. One part I was a little confused on was as to why the character was walking to the mirror. I did not understand that part. What is the mirror? I thought it was just a plain mirror but you said she is walking towards the mirror. That’s the only part that could use a little clarification. I think you could end this by having someone take the mirror or just have someone accidently let all the shadows out of their world. You could then have Eichi find Luchia and have them try and get all the shadows back into their world. Lastly, I liked all the detail you put into describing the shadows and where they live and what they go through.Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13606168584447037981noreply@blogger.com