tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post6431123763430334775..comments2023-07-05T05:03:33.255-04:00Comments on Publish, or Perish!: Missing...-Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14945466553228253710noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post-64933642057486755242011-02-27T11:13:13.349-05:002011-02-27T11:13:13.349-05:00I would think that Nina would be more mad, sad, an...I would think that Nina would be more mad, sad, and disoriented than seemingly angry. It would also seem like she would want to search the house top to bottom in order to find the key rather than ignore the situation. Although I do like how you included an interesting plot twist, add interest. Though maybe what you want to do is include more description in between what the people say.Super Robot Attackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09115964205796780996noreply@blogger.com