tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post7382478097034633405..comments2023-07-05T05:03:33.255-04:00Comments on Publish, or Perish!: Percy Winkley Makes A Friend-Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14945466553228253710noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-555274650815496201.post-446731253445997132011-10-30T13:42:43.139-04:002011-10-30T13:42:43.139-04:00Hey sweetie! :) I think this is a very cute little...Hey sweetie! :) I think this is a very cute little poem you made. I like the consistent rhyme scheme you have going on and the idea that little Percy gets a friend. It makes me smile. I like the fact that his friend is Robinhood. It makes it like a cute little nursery rhyme that you'd tell children. Not morbid at all? I enjoyed it thoroughly, but maybe to improve it would be to try to pick different words to rhyme with and make sure things seem to make sense. Overall, I dig you and your poem pretty girl! <3 :)AAVautierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12348643606231752655noreply@blogger.com