April 13, 2012

Short and Sweet

I might use this in story sometime in the future. It's pretty short, so feel free to tell me how you feel about it and if I should add anything more.


But when you truly fall for someone, you become attracted to all the details. It’s not about how they look anymore. It’s the way they lick their lips before they speak. The way they rub their eyes before they fall asleep. The way they laugh when they’re nervous. The way they pout when they’re thinking hard about something. The way they absent mindedly play with their hair. The way their face lights up when their favorite song is on the radio. Suddenly, all those little, insignificant things matter. And it’s those things that make you fall all the more in love with them.

4 comments:

  1. Ohh I like the idea! I love the detail =}

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  2. Thats pretty good. There's alot of truth in that.

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  3. I agree with those people.^ This is a really good piece, you can write a great story with this.

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  4. Thanks, guys, I'm definitely thinking about using it for something soon:)

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