Blood Coated Her Pearly White Teeth

Does this all make enough sense? I'm not sure if it's easy to tell what's going on or not. Feedback, please!

Blood coated her pearl-white teeth. The metallic taste was sickening to Natalie, but she continued to eat the brains of of her fallen comrades. She couldn't disappoint her team by not following through. By pretending to be a zombie, she had penetrated the zombies's base. Now it was feeding time, and Natalie was left with no choice. "Think of the team." She repeated over and over in her head. Really, brains were pretty nutritious, but disgusting nonetheless. While Natalie ate she scanned the crowd. She saw lots of zombies, obviously, but she was looking for someone in particular; their creator. He was a human scientist named McChicken who invented the virus in his basement. After he injected the first person, the takeover was inevitable. If she could kill him her mission would be a success. There! On an elevated platform overlooking the swarms of the undead stood a man with wild hair and thick glasses. He smiled wickedly down at his creations. Natalie edged through the crowd as inconspicuously as possible. She was now so close to the platform that she could see every line on McChicken's weathered face. Without taking her stare off of the villain, she reached for the pistol at her side and-- CHOMP! Natalie screamed and looked down at her hand. Green, viscous liquid oozed out of the bite marks. She knew in a matter of seconds her humanity would deteriorate completely. This was her only chance. She frantically grabbed the gun and fired. Her vision was starting to go red. The last thing she saw through human eyes was her bullets burying themselves in McChicken's chest.

My Mind Collaspes

I wanna scream! Make everyoe simply disappear. Walk alone, observing all the little things that are usaully overlooked. Being able to run my fingertips across the cement walls. My hand slides across as my eyes start to shut. I start to dream of a place containing no drama, no heart break, no sadness, and no humans who bring all of these things to life. Just me and the things I wish would last forever. Being able to be lifted into the air, being weightless. The clouds are my neighbors as I swim through the sky. As the day turns to night the sky is lit up by millions of stars. I lie out on the grass and stare up at the sky until my eyelids can not take anymore. As I sleep, I have no worries of where I am, or who is there with me. I will be able to enjoy just a simple, enchanting sleep. Everyday would be new, waking up to the smell of cut grass, a raindow reflection on the ocean before me. The sky was lit up with all shades of blue, I could feel the rain storm heading my way. I let my hair run wild in the winds that began to flow. The wind gets fast and the sky fades to gray. The smell of freshness in the air tells me that the raindrops are soon to fall. Suddenly I feel the tempature change, followed by a milllion waterdroplets hitting the ground at once. I begin to dance, looking up high and letting all my bodies energies be released. I let go of my body and let myself lean to the ground. Now I'm back, back to reality. Tjis [place is not filled with opprotunities.