Working on my book lately has become easier than I thought. I’ve gotten to at least 45,000 words. Well at least that’s what word said. The only downfall to writing a book is your going to want to publish it once it’s done. The thing about it is I don’t like when people critique me. It makes me snap at people almost every time someone says something negative about what I’m working on.
The coffee pot is full now with nice fresh Dunkin Donut’s coffee. Closing my laptop I stand up slowly and stretch my legs. I go into my cabinet and look for a couple coffee mugs. Damn, I only have my mom’s antique looking mugs. All well seems everything else is in the dishwasher. I really have to run the dishwasher today.
Showing posts with label How could I make this better?. Show all posts
Showing posts with label How could I make this better?. Show all posts
December 16, 2011
October 21, 2011
I love you...but....
When I look into your eyes, they seem to change color, auburn to metallic gray,
The twinkle in your eyes is like looking up at the stars, bright but so far away from us
You feel so cold when I touch your creamy pale skin, are you OK?
When you touch me, I feel so comfortable, yet unsteady at the same time
I try to take my feelings of comfort and unsteadiness away while I look up at the moon.
Your kiss is like a cold hard stone being pushed against my lips, smooth and controlled
When you smile, I notice that your K-9 teeth look so long and sharp, enticed much?
Once you kissed my neck, you automatically bit it where my vain was, ouch....
I feel like I'm being drained of all my energy and losing the blood to my brain, please stop....
As you finish, I start to dose off into limbo, you leave me lying on the ground with blood stuck to my neck, yet still kind of running slowly, oh my god...
I never thought I could die from being with you....my love.....you're a vampire....I.....(died)
The twinkle in your eyes is like looking up at the stars, bright but so far away from us
You feel so cold when I touch your creamy pale skin, are you OK?
When you touch me, I feel so comfortable, yet unsteady at the same time
I try to take my feelings of comfort and unsteadiness away while I look up at the moon.
Your kiss is like a cold hard stone being pushed against my lips, smooth and controlled
When you smile, I notice that your K-9 teeth look so long and sharp, enticed much?
Once you kissed my neck, you automatically bit it where my vain was, ouch....
I feel like I'm being drained of all my energy and losing the blood to my brain, please stop....
As you finish, I start to dose off into limbo, you leave me lying on the ground with blood stuck to my neck, yet still kind of running slowly, oh my god...
I never thought I could die from being with you....my love.....you're a vampire....I.....(died)
October 14, 2011
Small Town Gossip
The fire was spreading across the town. It was like gossip throughout a small town. It spreads alot faster than you think. Whoever set fire to the convienant store caused many to lose their homes. The ones without homes were standing out in the streets while the snow came down on them. The woods seemed to be a sancturary for the teens an college students. Most were back for Christmas vacation. They were throwing a huge bonfire. It was about halfway into the woods, in a small open field while the fire was just below the tree tops. The kids usually threw parties there, the older folks didn't know it was there, atleast they think they don't know. Once the fire started girls started playing in the snow, we girls always knew how to have a good time. We danced in the snow until the night ended.
October 22, 2010
Twinkie
A Twinkie, yellow in color
Cream filled center
Soft delightful texture
Tastes way better
Than any other snack cake
It smells so delicious
Twinkies are great
They cannot compare
They are clearly the winners
If I could, I would eat them for dinner
If I ever ate a Twinkie that tasted kind of bad
I would be devastated, my life would be very sad
So for now, I'm going to have some fun
Take it slow, and enjoy this one
Cream filled center
Soft delightful texture
Tastes way better
Than any other snack cake
It smells so delicious
Twinkies are great
They cannot compare
They are clearly the winners
If I could, I would eat them for dinner
If I ever ate a Twinkie that tasted kind of bad
I would be devastated, my life would be very sad
So for now, I'm going to have some fun
Take it slow, and enjoy this one
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