January 6, 2012

dun dun DUN!

The morning air was colder than ever, Julia wished she had grabbed another sweatshirt on her wat out. Even a flashlight to be able to see through this fog. She saw the big blue sign at the entrance of the park. It seemed creepy today, but if she wanted to make it to school on time she has to walk through. She took a deep breath and adjusted her bag's strap on her shoulder and head through. Everything was quiet and she quickened not trusting it. She saw a figure of a man standing in the middle of the path. She held on to her strap tighter and kept heading straight. The man yelled something at her but she couldnt understandwhat he was saying, until it was too late and she tripped. She looked back at what tripped her and saw a hand. She figured it was a trick so she got up and took a better look at the person laying on the ground. She didnt recognize him and the body wasnt moving. SHe nudged it with her foot, it was still. She screamed and look back up to where the man was standing and he was gone. She looked around to see if there was anybody around to help her but the place was empty. She looked down at the body and she couldnt think of what to do with it. SHe didnt have a phone to call the cops and she was going to be late for school. She started walking away and looked back at it, she couldnt just leave it, could she? She sighed and decided just to tell someone about it when she got to school. She did just that and it was a crime investagation. She kiept getting questioned by the cops about what happened. They seemed to not believe her about the man she saw since she didnt have any know exactly what he looked liked. After a few months they finally came to the conclusion that it was suicide. Than made Julia panic because she knows it wasnt suicide, it was murder and the murderer got away.

1 comment:

  1. Ah dude, I don't like the ending. I wish they caught that person. Thats not cool at all, tryna blame a murder on suicide.. wackk. other than that very nice

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