Hey guys ;) ;) ;) I am so sad and deeply saddened to say goodbye to all of you. It's been a great run here on "POP." I had so much fun reading about all your kool stories and poems. So, for the last round, I hope you guys really, really, really, really enjoy this sexy little number about a shower. Does it make you feel like you're in the shower? Does the shower sound inviting? Thank you so, so, so much for your feedback. I LOVE ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!1
It’s getting a little steamy in here isn’t it? Yeah, it is.
Wow, it’s getting warm. Why don’t you take off your clothes?
Yeah, that’s it. Now, all you have to do is get in.
It’s getting pretty soaked in here. Why don’t you soak yourself?
Yeah, that’s it. Grab the soap.
Rub it all over. Don’t forget to wash behind your ears.
That feels nice doesn’t it?
You don’t need to get out yet do you?
No, stay right here.
Isn’t it relaxing here? Don’t you love it?
You don’t have to leave. Please, stay.
You can stay inside my curtain forever.
You and me, that’s all we need.
Oh, don’t go! Come back!
Come back soon…or you’re smell and everyone will hate you.
I never realized that my shower was trying to rape me on the daily, but it makes sense. They are pretty steamy and inviting, clearly they have cruel intentions. But they do make you smell good, so that parts realistic too. I think its pretty realistic, although I feel like the shower would get annoyed if it had to clean smelly people all the time, does it have any angst? Probably not since its so steamy. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the personification. The shower has a interesting voice, part seducer/part mother (wash behind your ears). There's a typo in the last sentence.
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