January 9, 2011

Winter is coming

The wind rattles the windows, whining a lonely song. Outside snow falls steadily, all hope it lasts long. The sun sets later, painting the sky with colors so bright. We watched in awe as it fades away, wishing us goodnight.

Just wanna know if it sounds ok so far.

1 comment:

  1. It's a sweet poem. It sounds good in my opinion.