February 15, 2018

Andres's home work

Andres Hulfachor


As Louis walked in this classroom his eyes lighted up as he saw the chairs. Now he can be as dirty and smelly as he wants to be without it being too noticeable. Louis the writer he is saw lots of computers to fulfill his passionate love for writing. Louis sat on a chair and looked around the classroom seeing that there were not many athletes so he can't get made fun of for his fake Jordan Jacket and other fake apparel that he has.

Andres Hulfachor

 
The boy said " Where in the hell are all your teeth you fat lard."

The Cowboy in an angry expression and a lispy voice " Who do you think your talking to big fella. Don't think I won't beat the snot out of you."

The boy said in a comical expression " You won't do shit you fat pussy. What are you going to do? Bite me." At this point the man was angry and started to chase after him. 

He started to scream " Get back here boy so I can give you a lesson on how to treat your elders."

The boy came back and said hopping up and down " What's a fat bitch cowgirl like you doing in my hood."

The cowboy said in an angry remark " Stop speaking to me like that you son of a bitch."

The kid yelled " your right my mom is a bitch but she'd beat the shit out of you." Finally the kid ran off into the dark laughing to himself really hard."
 

As I walked into the classroom I saw this wide shouldered 5'9 man with no facial expression on his face. I tried to stay as quiet as I could walking to my seat. He turned and looked at me with an expressionless face with his scruffy goatee. He had long brown hair that almost reached his shoulders. He walked over to me, and I tried to look away and not notice him. He came over and in a deep growl he said I am Mr. R.W.W Greene. Welcome to creative writing. He didn't blink once as he kept looking at me in his expressionless facial expression. I couldn't tell if he was happy or mad. Whichever it was it overwhelmed me. I managed to finish the class and I immediately went to guidance and switched out.



 

2 comments:

  1. in the last paragraph, you say "expressionless face' way too many times. I think you should only use it once and not repeat in 3 different ways.

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