May 8, 2011

Arta's Adventure

I came up with this story,
I hope it will be praised with glory.
The story starts with a girl,
and her friends, who saved the world.

This girl's name is Arta,
who lives on the planet, Artea.
She is Artea's princess,
who loves to draw scenary at different places.

Her planet was in trouble,
Arta along with her friends from other planets made it possible.
Possible for the trouble to disappear,
so she formed an powerful force to reappear.

When the enemy came to fight,
Arta along with her friends fought with all their might.
When the fight came to pass,
her planet was at peace at last.

Is this a good poem, from beginning to end?

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