February 25, 2011

The Doppleganger

Amanda came home after a difficult day at school, only to see Bob watching TV on her couch, wearing her clothes.

“Bob? Oh God,” Amanda groaned, “What the hell are you doing here sitting on my couch wearing my clothes?”

Bob stood up in surprise. And he raised his arms in victory forcing the too small shirt to stretching up and displaying a very painful looking muffin-top. “Isn’t it obvious? I’m going to take over your life!”

“Huh?” Amanda asked, “That will never work.”

“Hahaha!” Bob laughed, “How could it not work?”

“You’re a guy and I’m a girl,” Amanda said, “It doesn’t work like that Bob.”

“Yes it does.”

“No it doesn’t.”

“Fine! I’ll prove my pint with a duel!”

“Fine! Winner gets my life!”

“Don’t you mean my life?” Bob said smugly as he took out his Yugi Oh Cards.

Amanda and Bob started their duel. Unfortunately, Bob did not remember to copy Amanda’s deck (and his deck was so crappy) so he lost quickly.

“Go home Bob!” Amanda said with triumph, “And you can keep the clothes. I don’t want them anymore.”

Was I going to far here? Do you think I should have included actual details about the duel?


  1. very funny :) no, you weren't going to far here, and yes, you might want to add a little bit more detail with the duel.

  2. I thought that this was funny! I would add a bit mor detail on the duel because it was only a sentence long. I liked how a guy wanted to take over a girl's life so they dueled it out over yugi oh cards haha.