“Nina, this letter came for you in the mail. It’s a letter from your mother and father.”
“WHAT, they died almost three years ago!”
“I know, I’m sorry I read the letter to make sure that it was them and not a fake.”
“It’s ok Walter, may I read the letter?”
“You can… But you may not be able to read it.”
“Ok, but at least I can try.”
“That may work… but you have to find the key”
“The key? What type of key Walter?”
“The key is hidden some where in the house, but even I don’t know where it is.”
“Ok Walter I’m going to my room if you need me”
Nina darted up the stairs to her room. She started her regular morning and noon routine.
To be continued…
Do you think the dialog is realistic? What do tou think I should improve on?