This is a section pf a script I'm working on. I was wondering if it had enough detail about the characters and situation. If you could give any input I would really appreciate it.
Amy turns around to see a dark hooded figure standing behind her. She tries to scream but the man put his hand over her mouth and with his free hand grabbed her arm to restrain her. He told her to be quiet and he released his hand on her mouth. Amy let out a blood-hurdling scream. Alex had just entered his mom's bedroom when he heard Amy scream. He didn't think, he just ran down the stairs, three steps at a time.
Alex finally found Amy in the family room and also found a man standing next to her. He had grabbed her by the hair and had a knife to her throat.She was whimpering like she had already been beaten. Alex didn't know what to do. The man had Amy as far away from the entrance as possible so Alex couldn't grab her and run.
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