September 23, 2010

Why The Pastry Chef Was Afraid To Leave His House.

        Why The Pastry Chef Was Afraid To Leave His House is a fable that is about how a Chef is afraid to leave his house, because the blackbirds in the willow tree in front of his house will attack for his pastries. I feel as if Icould've made this more age appropriate, because it is intended to be for children eight and under. How could I make this more age appropriate?
        The Pastry Chef was afraid to leave his house, because he was afraid that all of the blackbirds in the old willow tree would eat his pastries. They loved the Chef's creations, so any opportunity they had to get some, they did. It happened once before, the Chef left his home carrying two blackberry pies. The blackbirds smelled the delicious aroma of the pies, and attacked the poor Chef to get them.
        If he ever needs to transport his pies, he does it in the wee hours of the night when the blackbirds are asleep. But even then he must be very quiet, because you never know when they will attack.

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