October 14, 2011
Bumped Noses and Giggles
Their first kiss ended in bumped noses and giggles. Mary and Daniel were five years old then, and they have since grown apart. Yet, girls never forget their first kisses, and Mary was no exception. Mary was a bit unique though, because her first kiss, was also her last. Since their kiss, Mary has...changed. At age 17, she weighs in at about 300 pounds, has few friends, and has withdrawn from others. Daniel, in constrast, is the quarterback of the football team, social, intelligant, and absolutely gorgeous. He is the object of every girl's affection, especially Mary. Every time she walks by him in the hallway of their high school she winks. Mary decides to kidnap Daniel, if she can't have her first love, then no one can. She grabs him one day after football practice, dragging him into her basement, easily overpowering him with her weight. She looks into his helpless eyes and finally kisses him again. She smiles, "I don't know why I had to force you to be with me." She then begins to unzip his jeans, and quickly discovers that Daniel...is actually a Danielle, not quite as manly as everyone had thought. "Oh my God, I'm so sorry! I thought you knew!" Ben yelled as he escaped her grasped and ran out the door.
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Whaaaaaaaaatt? Starts out so sweet. At the beginning, you have me feeling like these two have a childhood romance, and then BAM! She gets fat and he’s the most popular kid around. Then she’s doesn’t just change physically, she’s mentally messed up and decides to kidnap this kid. That’s where I started getting weirded out. How did no one see this 300 pound girl kidnap this guy? No one heard him screaming? Seems difficult to just believe that this happened. Then she goes at it with him against his will. Soooo confused at this point. I also found it super sketchy that she just starts unzipping his pants. That’s where the main shock comes into play. Daniel is a Danielle! Brilliant!!! Not only is the romance dead, but now Mary has to question her entire life lol. Does she become a lesbian? How did no one question that Daniel had lady parts? I guarantee at some point this “guy” got hit in the groin, and forgot to fake pain in his balls. Good overall, suspenseful, beautiful, amazing. Keep it up :) ♥
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