October 28, 2011
Mr. Greene and a hooker
As Mr.Greene approached the car it started to tick and the car was extremly hot. He had so much duck tape in his pocket from earlier, tying down his hooker. We all knew he had a goodnight. He takes his tape and wraps it around the handle of the car to try and open the door. The tape melts and he tries again and finally gets it open with so much duck tape. Now hes gotta stop the bomb in the car, he pulls out his 1000 yard thing of tape and wraps it around the bomb, drives to his ex wifes house and it blows up sounding like a old lady fart.
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that....was...GOLD! EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS PERFECT! I can see Mr. Geene doing this in my head and it is brutal. I would say if you really want to make this beliveable (like a news artical beliveable) then you should really get into the detail. Sweat, blood, gasoline, everything needs to be in detail. Get into the dirt, get lower than the dirt, GET TO THE BONE of this story. it must be told, YOU MUCT REWRITE IT WITH WAY MORE DETAIL! Very well then, go do gods work, it is your calling.
ReplyDeleteOh my god this is hilarous! this made my day. u should write more funny ones like this.
ReplyDeleteThis is a funny short story I liked it.
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