October 7, 2011

Last time i drink

As i sit here in class the fire alarm goes off so i run out the door fast jump down the stairs to find out that there are fire fighters holding the door shut and wont let me out side but im thinking theres a fire let me out while im thinking that i hear explosions and people yelling for help then i hear a cupple gun shots the yelling stops and its dead quiet alls that you can hear is the fire raging i start to run away cause i know for a fact im next as im running away i see these twos guys with pitbulls and these two guys have grenades RPG'S i know they saw me there dogs start to bark and i saw that the owners were cuting off there leashes one of the dogs gets a hold of my calf muscle i fall down to the floor in pain thinking this is it the other dog starts to chew and tear up my hand then the two guys run twords me and start to kick my ribs and start to stomp on my stomache i start to puke and i start to puke blood and i could see that one of my ribs were sticking out of my torso area then they start to......then i wake up i look around i see puke everywhere and my foot fell on the heater when i was sleeping and that i peed my pants i look at the floor and see beer cans everywhere i guese i had to much to drink and all of that was a dream haha

2 comments:

  1. Wow I really like this story. I find this so amusing and it was so detailed! I really find this to always keep me on my toes. I also enjoy the great effect everything has. The only thing I don't like is that, the ending is a little bleh like u maybe could have added a few more scenes instead of just straight jumping to the end. I understand it was a dream but what happened after? That's what I would love to know! Great story tho:)

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  2. WOW!!! That was a good story. I thought that really happened to you. It was very detailed. I agree with Josh of what happen after that happen. Great story.

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