The door opened slowly by itself Ashley and her friend were on the porch and quickly ran off it when the door opened. They kept running until they reached the end of the street by a stop sign to catch their breath.
"Whatt was that?" Ashley asked.
"I don't know you said that house was abandoned!" Jenny said looking back to see if anyone was following them.
"It is, no one lived there since the Jonson's moved out three years ago." Ashley said turning back. "It was probably the wind that opened the door. That house is very out of shape."
"Oh, that's probably it." Jenny said and they both started walking back to the house. When they made it to the porch the door was still open.
"C'mon i always wanted to know what it looked like inside." Ashley said walking threw the door way.
When they looked around the house was dusty and full of cobb webs. The floor had serious damaged.
"Ashley, we shouldn't be in here we could get in big trouble. " Jenny said walking slowly behind her.
"Relax, we will only explore for a minute." She said and open a random door that looked out of place in the what was a living room. When she peered in she saw dead bodies laying on the floor. They both scream and fell back on their butts. They got up fast and bolted out of the house and ran straight home.
Ahhh! I thought they were gunna get chased by a psycho or something but no dead bodies! Very nice, just a few spelling mistakes, but honestly who doesn't have those.
ReplyDeleteloved it. i would continue the story if i were you. it has a lot of different way's to go. maybe they could find the murderer. or they could get trapped in the house, with no way out, and the murderer is somewhere inside.
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