December 23, 2011

Ode 2 Poo

Brown and log-like
Pushing, plopping, smelling
It hurts my butt hole while it leaves

Hi guys! Here's a cute little poem I wrote about my favorite little treat. I hope you guys like it. I'm concerned about my line with 8 syllables. Any suggestions on how to imporove it? Does it really make you love poop? I hope so. Happy holidays, everyone. Let there be peace on Earth.

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