December 16, 2011

PICNIC

Twas A lovely picnic, except when flying monkeys started swarming around me and my date. And even worse shes allergic to frovgs and we saw a frog. there was a swarm of frogs everywhere and monkeys. invading us! its terrible! "SAVE ME" she says As she styarts to puss out blood on her mouth. i get up leave and buy my self an ice cream cone.


Do you like this like short but really random peice? Let me know

2 comments:

  1. thats pretty brutal if i do say so myself. I like ice cream.....I do, i also love how the tone of this story just flips over in a matter of seconds. It seems the lack of sanity is just what this short needed. I liked it! Keep it up.

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  2. Wow, homie! You are one crazy dude! Just straight up ditching your date. Yo, from one man to the next, ice cream is way cooler than any girl. You should definitely add some more to this. I really want to feel the pain inside of this girl. Let me feel her fear when she sees this frog. You are quite the writer! Hit me up if you ever want to spit some rhymes together ;)

    ribbit ribbit, homie

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