Amelia and Jen were bestfriends, they did everything together. Went shopping, wore eachothers clothes, told eachother everything. Seeing one with out the other was very rare, they were pretty much inseperatable. They shared one not so good thing in common as well, they both had a crush on the same guy, Jake. Jake was the quarterback of the highschool, and an unbelieveably good looking guy. His hair was brown and curly, but not too long. Jen and Amelia always fought over who was going to date him, and that was one of the only things they ever got mad at eachother over. Amelia was the head cheerleader at their school and you would think that her and Jake would be the perfect couple. One day in math class Jake asked Jen out for coffee after school, she immediately agreed and she was so excited, but she couldn’t tell Amelia. It was a Friday afternoon and Jen and Amelia always go out afterschool, so when Jen said she couldn’t, and Amelia was hurt.
(one hour later) At the coffee shop Jen and Jake flirted over lattes and a slice of boston cream pie, then she noticed Amelia walk in. She was hoping Amelia didn’t notice so she continued talking as if she wasn’t there. A few minutes later Amelia had walked over and poured her strawberry smoothie all over Jen’s head. Jen took what was left of the pie and smacked her in the face with it. When they both took a look at each other they both laughed, and agreed that no boy was worth fighting over.
I wrote this for a writing exercise we had. Any suggestions to make this piece better? what information can you tell about the characters aftering reading this?
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