March 25, 2011

Rudy Demorzio’s life has never been normal. Rudy has seen his share of things at the young age of 20. The year is 1989. Rudy lives in Italy near Rome and is the only child of a very well to do family. The ways in which his family gained their status, however, are not within the norm. In fact his family is more infamous than it is famous. Rudy is the son of Lou Demorzio, the most notorious mobster in Italy. The Demorzio’s were feared by many and nearly impossible to arrest. Rudy was next in line to take over the family “business” something which he dreaded. Rudy was much different. Rudy is a boy 5 feet 8 inches. He has a sort of portly build and average strength. He has hazel eyes, dark brown hair, and a round face. In order to conform to the demands of his family, Rudy is forced to wear suits. He would much rather be in comfortable clothing such as sweats. He has a very laid back and comical demeanor unlike his very serious family. Rudy wanted to something real with his life. He wanted to get away from the crime and corruption of his family. His real dream was to be a Hollywood actor.

what do you think of this? is there too much description?


  1. the description is perfect, and I enjoyed it so far.

  2. I don't think there is too much description, just that it seems ot jump around a bit. This sort of makes it seem disorganized, I think, but other than that it is good and it sounds like the set-up of an interesting story.