It was autum, 2011. Nothing particular came o this anouncement of mounth, it just simply stated what it was. Ryan was sitting at the cafe table waiting for his girlfriend to finally show up, he was going to end their relationship. He just didn't want to deal with her anymore.
Ryan found Senisa to be such a killjoy; when he was with other people he had so much more fun, but if she was added into the equation he felt like he wasn't allowed to have fun anymore. Maybe it was that he felt she was a nudnick, so anoying that he felt the fun just be sucked out of him.
He looked up to hear the door ringing. It was Senisa. He looked over to her with rancour, trying to help prepare her for the fall. She looked for him for a while, then found him and sat down next to him and tried to kiss him, but he dodged it.
He decided not to waste any time, "I'm sorry but I don't think this relationship is going to work anymore."
She seemed to expect it, "You realize that if you go through with this, my rats might end up running amok in your house for a weekend."
"I'm going to take that risk."
Tears welled up in her eyes. She stood up, "It's not like I'm some sort of hussy or anything."
"You're not, it's just that-"
"I even brought you chocolates. Here you go," She said as she threw them at him.
I know it's not cheesy, I got that.
Do you think that there is enough break-up-ness? Sounds good?
It's great, even without the cheese. Nice use of this week's vocab words. I liked Senisa's rat comment a lot. Just one spelling mistake though, "autum" has a "n" after the "m."
ReplyDeleteIt sounded good loved how you used the vocab but maybe making her go amok in his house or make him act like nudnik so she can break up with him sound more better than him breaking up with her or something like that.
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