missing... (part2)

“What the hell was that?” she looked around the room to see where the noise was coming from. The noise sounded like a faint murmur or low moaning, it was coming from the closet. She took her pocket knife and headed towards the door. Without thinking she opened the door and turned on the light, it was Alfred.

“ALFRED…”
He was tied up with chains with a lock on it, and gagged. She undid his gage and tried to pick the lock to release the chains.

“Nina, are you all right?”

“Yes... yes I am why and what happened to you?”

“Early this morning there was a knock on the door and I thought that it was Ernest being extremely early again.”

“What do you mean, I just saw you ten minutes ago.”

“It's not safe here anymore... Nina what did I look like?”

“You looked like you... except for the tattoo of a blue dragon and a scar over his left eye.”

“Go up and pack a bag of clothes and stuff you can't live without ok?”

“Ok, but why?”

“That man wants you dead.”

“WHAT... why?”

To be Continued...

I would like to know if you have any saggestions to help make this story sound real?