The Escape
A young woman is kidnapped by a science cult. Her search for the reason why reveals a secret about her long lost father.
The Break In
In one night a teenage boy is tested by a home invader, will he pass the test? Will the invader escape and leave the boy injured.
Crater Lake
Do a boy and girl have what it takes to destroy a powerful ring and outrun the government in order to stop a potential catastrophe?
Cell 413
A young woman wakes in a room. Will she find out why she is here or will she be killed for the secret power she possesses?
Do these sentences make you want to read the story they are portraying? Is there anything that doesnt sound right or make sense?
The Break In - you should take out the question of leaving the boy injured, that gives it away and it makes the story seem too simple. Maybe put something about who the invader is, his age or name or something.
ReplyDeleteCrater Lake - the "ring" is confusing, at least to me, I didn't really follow what you meant by that or the catastrophe - elaborate.
Cell 413 - sounds like a nicer version of saw. Try combining that into one sentence and so it isn't a question, but rather a statement.