September 23, 2011

The Disease

There’s a new STD in town where you grow two horns and a tail. It’s a very contagious disease. Three of my friends have gotten it. If you touch anyone or have any contact with other who has it you are at high risk of getting the disease as well. Everyone in town had to wear gloves and ski masks so others who didn’t have the disease yet wouldn’t catch it. Even at the doctor’s office they were wearing them. Anyone that has caught the disease is told by the doctors to stay inside and not to have any contact with people. The only way that you can get rid of the disease is to take a pill that’s prescribed by the doctor’s office. If you take this pill you have a chance of growing even more horns and maybe even another tail because this is a pill that unicorns take when they are sick.
What can I do to make this into a story?

1 comment:

  1. If you are planning to make this into a story, you're going to need more of a plot to go with this idea. The concept is very nice, but I am confused on a few things that will need to be adjusted. First of all, you start off by saying the disease is an STD, which means that it is a sexually transmitted disease, but then people start getting it by any contact with an infected person. Pick one or the other, you can't have both. Otherwise, I think this story has a lot of potential. Try to think of a good plot to go with this idea. Maybe there is a scandal about who gets infected, or the main character gets the disease. Be creative and make sure that the concepts follow through in the whole story so as to not confuse the reader.

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