September 26, 2011

A MALL ADVENTURE (preview)

They walked around the mall talking and window shopping. A man looked at them scared his skin was grayish green and he tried to cover his face with his eyes.

SAVIE
Did you see that?
ABBY
Yeah, what is up with him?
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TAYLOR
Maybe he’s sick.
PANEL 3
Taylor waving to the man.
TAYLOR
Hi, you look sick you should go take an Advil.
RANDOM DUDE
I’ll kill you!
TAYLOR
No you won’t you’re just confused.—
PANEL 4
Abby calling to Taylor, random dude getting close.
ABBY
Taylor, stop being stupid and get back here!
TAYLOR
What?
PANEL 5
Random dude eats Taylor.




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3 comments:

  1. lol, best story ever.
    what happens to abby?
    please tell me she gets eaten too. :D

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  2. thanks, Nancy =) i love being eaten by random crazy mall people in stories =)

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