This is the writing exercise we did in class today involving fish flavored coffee. I'm looking for any friendly advice about how I can make this more interesting and add more to it.
Jean sat in her room, trying to think of a new flavor of coffee. Her taste buds were bored with the flavors already out there. She wanted something fresh, new, and exciting. As she sat cross legged on her bed, she glanced at her goldfish swimming without a care in his fish tank.
" Well Willy? You got any ideas?" she asked, frowning at the goldfish. Willy ignored her and continued swimming. Jean sighed then got an idea. Why not try fish flavored coffee? Now to make it would be the challenging part, she thought as she grinned at a now frightened Willy.