as i get dunks i notice they have a new flavor fish coffee? sounds gross,, but hey im gonna give it go. I wait in line and finally decide to chose this flavor i say "hot fish flavor extra creem extra sugar. they say sure 6.99. i was like damn thats expensive! Ehhh what the heck i get my coffee to find a real fish swimming in my coffee im stick shocked dont know what to do.....
What can i do to make this story a little bit more longer?/
Ewww that sounds really gross coffee.It was a good start of a story maybe you should tell the reader what it taste like and give us discriptions.
ReplyDeleteits a good start of a story, but you should describe more what the coffee looked like and you have some spelling errors.
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