October 15, 2010

Description Writing Exercise

Lauren walked into the classroom and could feel the warm air on her skin. She sat down at her bright computer and couldn't wait to get started. The world wide web esd just waiting for her in that box. All she had to do was use it. She looked around as the computer was loading and saw all of the huge posters staring back at her. All of the black and white posters were just hanging on the wall waiting to inspire her. She took one more look around the classroom and looked at the different computers and bright cords underneath them. She then turned her attention back to the brilliant gray and black box infront of her.

This is a writing exercise I did that used a lot of description. What mood do you think I was trying to portray?

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