October 29, 2010

Moose Poem

Tell me what ay think!
Dead leafs all around me,
The cold frost climbs inside me,
The hoofs on my feet keep me going in a steady beat,
Nature has my soul to keep,
Looking for food is always key,
Then i feel a sharp pain near my feet,
Metal teeth sink in real deep,
The sound of the gun shot has set me free.

1 comment:

  1. omg awesome!! i like how you made it die in the end. it shows intensity