Ok so I made this up about fall because I have nothing else to put up. It is NOT supposed to rhyme. It one of those that just are cool.
Fall leaves falling,
wind blowing
apple cider, pumpkins,
Scarecrows, in the yard
little witches and spider-men
snuggling up by the fire
fall
This doesn't seem very descriptive to me. It feels like its lacking excitement and fun. You could make it a lot better by maybe adding a little more descriptions...
ReplyDeleteI love fall poems! It's brief and good, but I think it needs more descriptions as well. Like, what's so good about watching leaves fall? Or apple cider and pumpkins? And I don't really get the little witchs and spider-men part. Are they little kids or a couple? Just add what fall is really to you and your poem will be fantasic.
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