October 15, 2010

Mr. Greene

My teacher walks into class with a skull ring, weird clothing and bright blue eyes. Some days he shows up with converse and regular pants on. He even acts like a teenager, a 15 year old boy! I can never take him seriously. He's so weird, it's not even funny. I'll laugh if he walks into class with a suit and tie. An outfit like that doesn't match him. AT ALL. What kind of teacher do I have?!


What tone is this?

2 comments:

  1. Ha ha ha that made me laugh out loud. That is obviously the ridiculous paragraph. The sad thing is, is that most of the things that you said is true. “I'll laugh if he walks into class with a suit and tie.” I think I found that sentence to be the funniest in the paragraph but the whole thing made me laugh.

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  2. I would also have to say that this is the ridiculous one. It's quite good. Nice job.

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