October 15, 2010

Exposition Exercise

This was a writing exercise we did in class. What feelings or emotions do you get when you read this?




Midnight black hair, gelled to form small, sharp points, lay flat on his head. The darkened, earthy clothes and dramatic crimson tie highlight the darkness that swirls throughout his icy blue eyes. Eyes that when narrowed, pierce into your soul and freeze your inner being. The frown on his face is surrounded by a shadowy goatee. His slow yet powerful walk shake your core as he passes you. You can feel your heart freeze as you feel his cold stare drilling into the back of your head.




Thanks for reading!

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