October 15, 2010

Descriptive Paragraphs

The walls are plain and white, just like everything else in this room. The posters talk about nothing interesting, and the computers are the slowest in the world. The only sound that can be heard is the low humming coming from them. The list on the board gives endless work, and the quotes covering the walls are beginning to fall off.

The pages are filled with endless words, opening our minds to the rest of the world. THe torn and bent pages make the dictionary interesting, and keeps us guess which words we could possibly be missing out on. The 1534 pages covered in words and definitions offer so much knowledge, not to mention the other sections dedicated to other things besides definitions!

He's literally covered from head to toe in the color green. He must really love his last name! Everything that comes out of his mouth is absolutely hilarious, and the way he teaches is unlike any teacher that I've ever had or met before. The scenarios he gives us to write about are both hysterical and insane. Greene definitely doens't think twice about being weird.

1 comment:

  1. 1. Boredom
    2. Adventure
    3. Ridiculous
    In the third paragraph you should talk more about his attire and how he wears the skull ring and the pierced ears. You should talk more about how Mr. Greene looks, you do a good job describing his personality but talk more about the looks.
    In the first paragraph you should talk more about how bad the computers are in the room.

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